On My Own Music Video

[paperkut12]

Hey guys, here's a music video I did for a friend of mine. We had only planned for like a day before we decided to shoot this and it was super cold that day so keeping things steady was tough (didn't want to drag my tripod with me). Anyway, looking for some feedback. I know there's problems all about and it's still just a rapper rapping to the camera, but maybe there are redeeming qualities. Thanks.



Also, yay 2,000th post!

[paperkut12]

Now on vimeo. Any thoughts on improvements or anything at all? >.>

[KingDucky]

Well, he really needs to work on his flow. His music is too similar to Wiz Khalifia's, too.
Buuuut, I really like the video! The static shot, where he kind of teleports around the screen is really enticing. The color's good too, imo. I don't really get bored watching it, so that's a good sign.

Good Job!

[paperkut12]

Thanks, Ducky. I appreciate you taking the time. I'll make sure to pass that along to him!

[RockDonkey]

A redeeming quality is how the band sounds. Also appealing that he in some parts sings and in other parts sings along.

[paperkut12]

A redeeming quality is how the band sounds. Also appealing that he in some parts sings and in other parts sings along.

Thanks for giving it a look, RockDonkey. I appreciate it.

[Gillvane]

It's a rapper, rapping, in different places. Even if you're the best rapper in the world this equal boring. When you're not the best rapper in the world, this equals even more boring.

[paperkut12]

It's a rapper, rapping, in different places. Even if you're the best rapper in the world this equal boring. When you're not the best rapper in the world, this equals even more boring.

No problem, I understand where you're coming from, but I knew what I was getting myself into in terms of what the video was going to end up like. Thanks for watching. Hopefully the next one won't be like that.

[KingDucky]

It's a rapper, rapping, in different places. Even if you're the best rapper in the world this equal boring. When you're not the best rapper in the world, this equals even more boring.

But it's still pretty good for what it is. Once again, good job!