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    Red face Short Comedy: Flatmates - Toe Nails (Canon Rebel SLR)

    Hi All,

    Here's a fun short comedy I made about two flatmates. Let me know what you think



    Hope you enjoy, Jonny

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    Funny little short! Looks pretty good, audio needs a lot of work though!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vishus View Post
    Funny little short! Looks pretty good, audio needs a lot of work though!
    I second that! It was good but it seems that the audio kind of clipped somewhere around the 2/3 of it.
    Other than this the video was well lit and the framing was good too. A good little short!
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    Nice story!

    Did anybody mention that audio needs some work? How did you record it?

    I don't know if it was the Aussie accent, but your dude was a bit hard to understand, a bit unarticulated to my ears.
    "It is dark the other side. Very dark!" - "Oh, shut up and eat your toast!"

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    You have created a nice series there, simple but enjoyable, but it seems you have the same audio problems through the line...
    "It is dark the other side. Very dark!" - "Oh, shut up and eat your toast!"

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    Hi All,

    Thanks for the comments! Seems like a few about the audio, I'll give it some more attention and see what I can do. For reference this one was shot with the audio going into a DVX100 which I believe is 12bit audio. I was using radio mics.

    Thanks for watching and taking the time to comment, another attempt is in order :-)

    Thanks, Jonny

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