Antman's Short Film Contest #23 - Music Video

[Daniel Rutter]

we can see every pimple in her face. Now what? Gaussian blur?

And that's one of your card based cams, right?

Some people :P

[Timbit]

Sorry I'm late with my responce! I kept having to leave when I would get to this thread to read it...

My advice is, limit your pans. There were a few in there that were distracting me from the video itself.

I agree with you after watching it again. I'll keep that in mind for the future.

When the performer is singing it looks like a lip synch, in some of the takes. For some reason if the talent sings along with the reference, it looks more convincing. Don't ask me why. Also I wasn't keen on those cross-dissolves at the chorus parts. But I really enjoyed it and had a good laugh. Great job!

I tried to sing along on all of the takes, but my voice got a "little" hoarse after a while, so I didn't vocalize as much as I should've. And I'll keep the cross dissolves in mind too, as you're right that it is a bit too much.

Maybe just the squeaky sound of the door at the end and you need an extra light to create a more interesting contrast in your face.

I should have faded that door squeak out... And lights, definitely!

Bizarre song

The quality of the backing track was not that great, so I’m assuming this was sourced from youtube or some other on-line source.

YouTube. I would of loved to take it off the original DVD I own, but couldn't figure out how to do that in my limited timeframe..

Too bad Dan's entry was a NCE, as I said, he'd have got my vote.

After watching them, I say it's a toss-up between Drapes and Daniel's entries.

And the opening scenes in Playing's one were really good ones.

I totally loved them as well!

Timbit one's was funny, but the voice tone didn't do it for me, sorry!

You are right, it is squeaky.

For pure entertainment, Tim gets my vote.

Ditto, it was funny. And who doesn't get sad when the pizza doesn't arrive!?

Tim should definitely think of becoming an actor

The cows would hate me! Oh wait, they already hate me, so they'd be happy. That's right...

Here's the original if anyone is interested.

Thanks everyone! I enjoyed all the entries, but I'm still not sure whether I'd choose Drapes' entry or Daniel's. I liked them both! Good job to all!!

[charlie_tango]

And you know what? I know one person who could benefit from this... and that's Charlie_Tango. Sure, her first entry wasn't "great", but I betcha with a little push... she could improve. She's got the gear after all (and Draps there to help her out any time).

Grrrrrr!
I just hope this one will be good enough so you'll stop with this!
(thanks to Draps for the translation)

[Daniel Rutter]

so you'll stop with this!

?

Simply stating that your entries can only get better

[drapeama]

Simply stating that your entries can only get better

Yeah, I think she knows it, but just bugging you!

[Timbit]

I just hope this one will be good enough so you'll stop with this!

Simply stating that your entries can only get better

Mine sure did!