
Originally Posted by
AJUK
Editing-wise, I'm not a big fan of the wipes and keyhole effects. They look super cheesey.
Filming, you really need a better tripod, the pans look stiff and jerky, so a fluid head will really improve things there, also you have several instances of small 'jerky' adjustments to your framing which make the video feel less polished, try to change the framing smoothly if you need to adjust during a shot (again a fluid head will help).
I'd also consider including some more shots of the car, we only really get to see the back of it, if you introduced it more up-front with some 'top gear' style shots of the bodywork before homing in on the exhaust.