Vote Aslan Commercial

[mcost]

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I made this video for a friend who's running for sustainability commisioner at his Universty.
I made it really quickly as a favour, but I thought I'd let you guys check it out and see what you thought.
It's meant as a parody of artsy commercials.

[blondandfun]

go wash a few cars then get a $100 tripod...

[Lunchbox]

The video doesn't bring any message.. I don't understand the language but the commercial didn't make me want to vote for that guy.

[Lawrence189]

Haha, I agree with blonde and lunchbox, I felt no message or meaning. Invest in a steady cam. Also, as far as shots go, get some extremely close ups of the pianist and the notes he's hitting on the piano, some nice eye shots or something. Normally when I watch a commercial or trailer of a musician, I really feel the emotion. I did not feel any emotion towards this but it had the potential. Also, the 25% speed [slow motion] with the bowling ball needs to be smooth, raise it to 50%. Good luck next time.
P.S. That reflection shot at 0:33 was cool but zoom in a little. And invest in a steady-cam.