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Thread: TURMOIL (2010) RE-EDIT (changes from your feedback)

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    Default TURMOIL (2010) RE-EDIT (changes from your feedback)


    [ame="http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SB8CZs0joRA"]YouTube- TURMOIL (2010) Short Film[/ame]

    Hey guys, spent some time re-editing this based on the feedback I got from HV forums, can you please comment and lemme know what you think
    -better vfx
    -music rights are owned
    -better titles/credits
    -different story
    -sound design (spent a lot of time trying to fix sound issues)
    Last edited by TysonCinema; 2010 February 22nd at 13:24.

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    Much better! The audio was great, acting fantastic, and the image beautiful. The story is much more apparent this time, great job. Looking forward to more films from you.

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    @ crazyeight - haha that's what's up! Posting my project here then taking advice improved the film so much, I'm definitely gonna do the re-edit a lot more.

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    Nice, ProScores, correct?

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    @ shigeta - yeah it is proscores, I used music i had the rights to in the re-edit incase i wanna throw it in a festival or somethin.

    on the topic, anyone know where I can get full rights to more scored music?

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    It was a pleasure to watch and listen to! Really well done. It's all very 'crisp'/clean and professional.

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    ^ thanks mate, on to the next one!

    and to all of HV forums, you guys are insanely helpful, greatest short film forum.

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    This is a vast improvement on the original version (which I liked, but this is so much better.) It really does demonstrate the importantance of good quality sound design. The re-mix and enhancements on this cut lift the whole production value and now it really is a much more complete and satisfying film. Well done.

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    Absolutely amazing.

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