My Jenny Went to California (Short)
I DPed and edited this one. It was done with a hv40 and a letus35mini.
http://www.imdb.com/video/wab/vi374998297
I am also (MOD EDIT: more than likely not, as the same item has been relisted several times dating back at least as far as October) selling a Letus 35mini if anyone is interested.
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Last edited by Erik Bien; 2009 December 25th at 00:41.
I've seen it before, you posted it a few months ago.
You're not supposed to double post.
The Korova milkbar sold milk-plus, milk plus vellocet or synthemesc or drencrom, which is what we were drinking. This would sharpen you up and make you ready for a bit of the old ultra-violence.
I agree your not supposed to double post but I didn't see it the first time so i'll just go ahead and comment:
I saw what you were going for and it was a pretty good shot at your intent for what this short film was supposed to be but honestly it's not there yet. Considering you give so much care and planning into some shots and it seems like others you just did willy nilly without any prep at all. The parts where the poem is read is nice, and i actually liked the background music but it ceased to be film at that point and it started to become a powerpoint presentation. And I know you could say something like "but that's what I intended" but I see no reason to put text on top of film itself. If thats what you intended or not, it comes off as "we didn't have enough good shots so we'll put it on black". It ends suddenly (which is fine to me actually) but I don't think you nailed that either. In my opinion, if you're going to end suddenly you're going to have to make it interesting, at least put a fresh spin on the dradle before you stop the show.
Not bad overall, keep up the work
edit: i just saw your double post down the list a few vids and you need to quit the lalalala bud.
Last edited by SpinCrash; 2009 December 19th at 00:12.
How do you make does low light scene that smooth? Do you shoot the video with light and then edit the light? I have the HF20 and it really bad with lower level. Whats the trick
Yawn. Cliche after cliche.And all those cliches in the dark.
This must be the millionth time you posted this.
You can keep posting this as much as you want, but it will still be garbage.
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