2009 December 9th, 06:29
2009 December 9th, 14:41
All those shots look great actually. The only thing I would advise against are the vignetting on the first and last shots. It seems to work in the other shots because those are more dark, but when everything is well lit it just sort of looks like a post effect, which i hope you wouldnt want. Tone it down a bit if you can with those, but other than that it doesnt look to me like your pushing the envelope too much.
Also! the fourth shot with the typewriter is really smart and witty to me, definitely communicates whoever composed the shots (you obviously) thought hard about how to represent their perspective.
Last edited by SpinCrash; 2009 December 9th at 14:43.
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2009 December 9th, 14:48
Yeah, I was kind of thinking the vignettes wouldn't go over too well. The first is just the shadow from the desk lamp, so I guess I could lighten it up with a gradient or something in the top corner, the second was more deliberate. Just didn't like the way the shadow was casting on the stair wall. Thanks for the input, I'll see about changing that up a bit...
2009 December 9th, 15:47
Hey, real quick, if the first is just a shadow from the lamp than thats completely different, in video that will be very easy to realize because the shadow will stay on the wall as the camera moves, so in that case, i'd keep it there. I'd work on the bottom one only
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