first commercial!!!

[varuj]

hi everyone,i just finished this school project for my friend,he had to make a commercial about a candy bar so ya,it was a run and gun shoot we shot in like 30min,i know i messed up a lot on it,if you guys could critisize this for me i would be very thankfull

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu...oid=2063879158

[whtnova]

Video deleted?

[varuj]

sorry about that here it is
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fu...deoID=19523837

[betasx]

It looked good and all but I just didn't really get it. In the future if you want to make a chase seem faster just get tighter shots instead of speeding up a wide shot. Good work!!

[varuj]

thanks,i had a few tight shots but it didnt really work,ya i know the video doesnt really make sense i should have had a close up of the candy bar at the begining

[khanhbui]

pretty funny

[kadzbiz]

interesting.

[Fat Chocolate]

Loved how you coloured that Video Varuj what software did you use adapters if any ? Funny Vid how did that kid not notice his Chocolate bar being stolen ??? lol I Disaprove of all chocolate theft , Not to sure on the voice overs but all in all

Great Stuff
Fc

[mrob7]

the audio could use a little work, you should have got some ambiance and filled in some spots but pretty good overall. I liked the first shot the best. I really didn't get the end though lol

[mahngo]

Haha that was..interesting.

What settings did you use? How about adapters/lenses?

[tcindie]

A bit rough around the edges, and the acting was a little over the top -- especially at the end.. but not bad for a first try. The look was nice, it felt sort of 16mm filmish

[varuj]

thanks guys,to answer some of your questions,no adapters were used although i wish lol,actually the streat sounds were done in post.i color corrected it in vegas platinum,it was for my freidns class so we did this in a very short time,so i couldnt really plan before shooting,but im lovin this hv20 it gives me some great results after cc.if you guys have any questions please feel free to ask