The Flowers Treking - Day 2

[SiriNeos]

Here is a new chapther of one treking we made last july in the Ordesa National Park in the Pyrinees mountains, North of Spain.

Enjoy it and give me more advices!

Thanks,
SiriNeos

[ame="http://vimeo.com/3962318"]Travesía de Las Flores - Día 2 on Vimeo[/ame]

[SiriNeos]

Hello good people,

I would like to receive comments about it in order to improve my videos.

What do I do bad, or well,...?

Thanks.

SiriNeos.

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I speak from no experience...only as a spectator thus far. However, it appeared to be a very intimate experience yet I didnt feel that. The music I felt was also disconnected. Perhaps some tighter shots and also use your walking stick (assuming you use one) to double as a tripod. Need more thought out and slower pans. Perhaps shots or angles or framing where the camera is close to the ground and all we see are their feet walking past but behind that is a mountain top in the distance...hope Im making sense. Maybe closeup of someone looking upward...or over their shoulder tight so the viewer is there too. Hope I was constructive...like I said though Im only a viewer...looks like a beautiful place and thanks for sharing...

[SiriNeos]

I speak from no experience...only as a spectator thus far. However, it appeared to be a very intimate experience yet I didnt feel that. The music I felt was also disconnected. Perhaps some tighter shots and also use your walking stick (assuming you use one) to double as a tripod. Need more thought out and slower pans. Perhaps shots or angles or framing where the camera is close to the ground and all we see are their feet walking past but behind that is a mountain top in the distance...hope Im making sense. Maybe closeup of someone looking upward...or over their shoulder tight so the viewer is there too. Hope I was constructive...like I said though Im only a viewer...looks like a beautiful place and thanks for sharing...

Thanks for your advices.

One questions: Do you have any idea about musiv more connected?
I am ordering a hiking monopod stick. Thanks
I will follow your advice of having people details (feet walking, shoulder) and the mountains behind them.

SiriNeos