
Originally Posted by
fishops
Looks good for a rough cut, and a good first music video. The shots are cool, the footage looks good and the acting isn't bad at all.
There are a bunch of issues with the edit though, I'm sure you're aware of some of the technical glitches like the dissolves not going all the way through, and the aspect ratio problems with the stills.
Personally, I would take out all the dissolves. Try to cut with the beat of the music, make the video work like another instrument. Also, during the guitar solo, cut away from the band entirely and use the time to tell some story. If you don't have footage of the actual solo it doesn't work to cut back to the band strumming along without it.